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CH6
14 years earlier
melissa's pov

i parked the car in the garage and sat there for a few moments processing what had just happened. debating with myself weather or not i should go back and check on the car i had hit, and take the fine like an adult instead of running away like a child.
i got out slowly and creaked open the door. i heard smith and marianna arguing and smelt take out chinese coming from the kitchen.
"hey honey." walter said as i walked into the room. he kissed my cheek and handed me a glass of lemonade.
i walked into the living room and flipped on the TV. the news was on.
i kept it on so we could hear it from the kitchen.
i called for marianna and smith to come down for supper.
as we finished up supper there was something on the news that caught my attention.
"later tonight there was a hit and run on highway I-86. the car hit has had 1 killed and 2 young children in critical condition. The suspect has yet to be found."
the blood drained from my face. walter gave me a concerned look.
"i feel sick." i said i stood up from the table and ran to the bathroom.
i sat in there for a long time. walter knocked on the door after they had finished putting up the dishes.
"you alright honey?" he asked very concerned.
"i think it was food poisoning, check on the kids to make sure they feel alright." i managed to get out from behind my guilt.
what was i going to do? leave my family, because if i got caught and sent to jail, that would ruin their lives, that did seem like the best option.
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CH5
present
mariannas pov

jamie grabbed my shaky hand. i took in a deep breath. all i smelt was body odor and cabbage.
the tent was huge, well actually it turned out to be a hallway or entrance to the  barn... which had become the dance club for the night. Jamie ran off to the dance floor and i made my self to the bar over to the right.
as i took my seat i felt someone come up to where i was sitting.
"can i get you anything?" the figure asked.
i looked up and saw a well built guy that couldn't be more than 20 in front of me.
"erm, you got diet coke?" i asked with a crooked smile.
"you dont look like you need it..." he joke
i sarcastically laughed... it was true, being 17, i was pretty small. my doctor told me i was underweight, but its not like i was going to eat sugar all the time just so i could fatten up.
he came back with a tall glass filled to the rim and still bubbling. he put it on a coaster and leaned back on the counter.
i looked to my left and right to see why he wasnt helping any other characters. i found my answer.... i was the only one.
"so, whats your name?" he asked trying to strike up a conversation.
"Marianna, but my friends call me Mari."
"nice to meet you mari." he leaned came forward to the counter. i took a long sip from my glass. the music was blasting so i could barely hear anything he said, unless he yelled it.
"forrest." he said extending his hand for me to shake.
"like forest gump?" i joked.
he laughed sarcastically, imitating how i reacted to his joke.
i kinda liked this guy :)
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CH4
14 years ago
melissas pov

i turned the radio up as i moved along the high way. a backstreet boys song came on, and i thought of little marianna. 
she loved the group. sometimes she would run around the house singing the songs.
i smiled and continued down the road. 
i arrived at the outlets around five and got my shopping done around 6:45... looks like someone was getting a new toy if i didnt get moving. i chuckled to myself as i hauled all the bags to the car. i loaded them all in and started home.
as i got on the highway, it began to storm a little. the roads became very slick, but i wouldnt lotice that till later...
i sped up because it was getting late and as i walter said, i needed to be back home soon. i didnt notice my transfer onto the other lane until i ran into the side of  another car. i heard a scream and i panicked and sped off. 
i couldnt tell walter i may have just killed someone... and i needed to get home, i pushed it out of my mind. im sure their fine.

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CH3
present
mariannas pov

the county fair had been going on for a month and i had been begging my dad to let me go. finally he lightened up and said i could go. but little did he know that i was going tonight. Emily didnt care a bit. once she had tried to be the authority when my dad wasn't around and smith told on her... my dad told her that it wasn't her job to be in control over us, even though she was a nanny. she was just there to cook and clean and give us advice, so you might say that since then we have been spoiled.
i arrived at the fair, just in time for the nightly fireworks, signalling it was time for familys to go home. every night, starting at 11, the fair would close the grounds for teens only, where there would be hot guys and a tons of loud music everywhere, but you had to be 16+. my dad didnt think i was ready for it last year. . . he still doesnt think im ready, but im 17, and im smart enough to know that if walter reese said i could go to the fair, he wouldnt care when, he just would fuss at me later and never speak of it again. plus he wasnt home around half the time anyway.
i made my way to the entrance and paid for my $20 ticket. yes, it was pricey, but that ticket got you free food, free carnival food, and my family had so much money that we didnt know what to do with it. twenty dollars was like loosing a penny. when i got in i walked over to one of the nearby benches and pulled out my iphone. i sent out a mass message to my friends to see if they could come. most were already there, so i decided to go meet up with them. 
i saw them crowded around one of the side shows. there were a group of performers juggling balls of fire... it was interesting but not something i could watch for 30 minutes max. 
i found my friend jamie and her boyfriend louis. 
"heyyy mari!" jamie said slurred. great, she was drunk. i rolled my eyes, louis giggled like a little kid. i really didnt want to tolerate this. truthfully, i hated anything acholic or drug wise. it disgusted me. the smell, the taste, the way it made people act. i started to walk away when jamie grabbed my shoulder.
"c'mon mari, i gots someone you should meet." she winked and tilted her head to one side. she pulled me away from the freak show crowd into a tent. 
whop di doo, a tent full of carnies.

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CH2
14 years ago
melissas pov

"mommy!" marianna yelled as she ran up to my legs grasping them with her little arms. she look up at me with big sparkling eyes, "please dont go."
i looked down at her a smiled, "sweetie," i said as i picked her up and placed her on my hip, "i just need to run some errands, i'll be back in a bit." i handed her over to my husband walter, "and if im not back by 7, daddy can get you that new toy you wanted." 
i looked over at walter and he nodded. he put her down on the ground and she ran off to go play with smith, my older son. 
"be back sooner, because i need you to make a cake for smiths birthday tomorrow." he told me as he kissed me on the cheek.
"no worries, hun." i kissed him back. i grabbed my coat off the coat rack and and opened the door, "im just going to the outlets for a bit."
i walked out and got into my car. as i pulled out i saw walter standing in the doorway holding marianna on his hips and smith was at his side. they all wave bye with big smiles on their faces. i waved back and blew a kiss.
as i pulled out i looked back at the big house. i decided that i needed to tell walter that it would be better if we painted the house white, the dark brown color it was now made it look very gloomy. 
i also decided we needed better landscaping, and to get a porch swing for the porch that surrounded the house.
i took a final look, and then zoomed off.

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miraculous love
chapter 17: kylies pov
finale (its going no where)

after we finished our meal, matt escorted me to his car. it was already late and there was a full moon. matt drove us to the beach that we had our first date on. he got out a picnic blanket and a plate filled with his moms homemade brownies. he also got out a radio and set up a picnic down at the beach while i leaned on the back of his car. he held out his arm wide and i ran to him and jumped into his arms. 
"your amazing you know!" i smiled and he kissed me. the radio was play slower song. he put me down onto my feet and pulled me close. he rocked me back and forth and smiled. 
"i try." he kissed me on my fore head. 
"you know what."
"what?" he kissed my nose and smiled.
"we have something amazing."
"what do we have." he kissed me on my lips very softly.
"a love only possible because of fate and miracles"
"mhm." he kissed me on the neck.
"a miraculous love."
"i like the sound of that."
so we stood on that beach in dustin florida, dancing under the moon light. smiling like lovers who had just found each other when they thought all hopes were lost. 
but basicly thats what we were.

this is the ending you get when im rushed busy on writers block and am completely bored with the story. kylie and matt/james story ends here. im going to write again but its gotta be good. if you have anything you would like to read any ideas feel free to comment. i need something new! 
love you all bunches :L
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